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Post by Silverlight Sun May 13, 2018 11:44 pm

Name: Silverlight

.Age: 18 moons

Clan/Group: Cherryclan

Rank: Deputy

Gender: She-cat

Personality: Silverlight is a very caring cat who loves to hang around her family and friends. She seems to always follow the warrior code but breaks it if necessary. She loves playing moss ball with her siblings but hates anything that involves twolegs. Sometimes if she is free of warrior duties she will help Angelsky with herbs if needed. She will be loyal to her clan no matter what. Silverlight makes everyone feel happy as she has a good sense of humour and understands the stress the clan is put under when there is a battle to be fought. She will do anything for her leader and I mean anything. Sometimes she is very argumentive but only if it's for the sake of the clan. Although she looks tough on the outside she is actually very soft. Silverlight's feelings can get hurt very easily if she gets insulted. But her softness makes her the strong warrior she is. Silverlight is very aggresive with clanmates and in battle. She will always argue if she knows she's right.

Appearance: A beautiful short haired she-cat with snow white fur and bright blue eyes, Silverlight is very beautiful. In leaf bare, her fur fullens out and becomes fluffy, quite like how moss is described. She is a sleek cat with a medium length tail. She has scars on the inside from what her and her clan has been through.

Biography: Originally as a rouge Silverlights' rouge name was Silver. Her family was: Rain (mother), Frost (father), Snow (sister) and Water (brother). Soon they all found sanctuary in Cherryclan where a warm welcome from Angelsky awaited them. As time went by she became an a apprentice to a warrior. After her final apprentice test she recived her warrior name... Silverlight. As time went on Silverlight became more noble. One leaf-bare morning she was on a hunting patrol she scented the reek of a fox. She raced as fast as she could but just when she thought she could warn the clan for battle she heard screams of her Clanmates. She rushed over as she saw blood splattred over the floor, she saw her brother and sister fighting fiercly as cats from the great Lionclan. Suddenly the snarling fox made it's way to the nursery so it could have an easy out of Honeykit but she wasn't going to let it come to that. By the time she got there she thought she was to late but luckily the fox didn't get to the defenseless kit. Silverlight took her by the scruff and took her to where they wold be safe. But when she noticed blood dripping from her mouth she definitly knew something was wrong. Silverlight gasped as she saw a whole heap of blood streamed from her mouth. As soon as the sound of fighting went silent she slipped out and called out to Angelsky to look at her. When Angelsky did a full look over her face was filled with grief as she told the clan that half of Honeykits' tongue was ripped out. Silverlight spoke up as she said she would raise the kit as her own. As days passed she cared for the little kit. One day Angelsky spoke to the clan as they all yowled in agreement as Silverlight wondered what all the comotion was about and when she came out of the nursery Angelsky explained that because of her acts of bravery and loyalty the clan had decided to make her clan deputy. And from then on Silverlight has carried out her deputy duties with respect and honour.

Family: Mum: Rainstorm
            Dad: Silverfur
            Sister: Snowpelt
           Brother: Wateripple
Adopted daughter - Honeykit

Bonds: Angelsky: Friend
           Shadefur: Friend
Stats:
Strength- 5
Speed- 5
Dexterity- 5
Stamina- 5
Charisma- 5
Intellect- 8
Stealth- 5
Herb Lore- 2


Last edited by Silverlight on Tue May 15, 2018 11:26 pm; edited 2 times in total
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Post by Quill Tue May 15, 2018 6:58 pm

Hey there! I have a couple things for feedback--
-She could use some more negative traits. I understand that she's sensitive, but she could use couple more to balance her out!
-If she helps Angelsky out with herbs occasionally, she should have a tiny bit of herb lore, or else she would be of no help.
-She could use a little more history. What exactly was her apprenticeship like? How did she come to be deputy? What were some major events for her in her history?

Thanks for reading!

--Quill
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Post by Silverlight Tue May 15, 2018 11:27 pm

Thanks Quill really needed that! Smile
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Post by Quill Wed May 16, 2018 9:15 am

Accepted! You're free to rp Silverlight!
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